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A huge improvment from my last flash! Enjoy- and give me any feedback.
Alot better than number 1. For certain. The effects (Explosions, gunshots) are superb. It also nice to understand the soryline, I didn't know the last one was a preview to a film.
Areas to improve:
- Animation, try animate tohe people, moving
- Add some shading
- Nice use of subtitles!
Overall, a big improvement. Good work!
7/10 - 4/5
thanks! but i didi use shading...
weird but it makes sense
Wow that was awesome. Keep up the good work!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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