Eulogy For: gary jules- mad world
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
07/21/08 – 02/26/09
hes wife is dead he got nothin to live for.
buhu
length 2 min
my best movie yet!!
agian?
please recommend to collectins.'
update: aww bad score!!!!!!!!!
It has some interesting shots, but really need that extra polish. Some things were just random or didn't fit. Better luck next time.
well, there's the animation...just need to make it smoother. The mouth movements aren't BAD but you need to make it smoother and add more frames or something. you got some work to do.
I do not like songs like that but with animation makes it more enjoyable
It had a good plot, but I think the animation wasnt the best. try spending a bit more time on these things.
great song to adapt into a flash.
how do people make these cool animations?
for something like this making sure the lips match the audio is key and it barely did. Animation wasnt bad, but the lip sync really took away from it.
You have some solid animation skills, and you can definitely do better than this. spend more time, be more careful with the details, and your flash should look much better. While your animation is good, spend more time on drawing skills.
Also, your animation matches the song well, too well. You took the lyrics too literally, and that may take away from the overall mood of your movie. When the song goes "tears fill glasses" you actually animated that, and it appears silly, taking away the movie's sad tone.
That's all the constructive criticism I have for you, hope to see the next one, the better one.
keep up the good work soon you'll have something immense
Though his lips were moving a bit to much and I think the line "tears are filling up their glasses" means eye glasses, not tumblers. Anyway I like the song, even if it is depressing and your animation was fine.
Yah I agree with the stuff below. Also, it takes A LOT of practice. I don't do flash I do audio but I still know to keep at it. So... KEEP AT IT! You'll get way better in no time!
I LOVE this song btw!
I liked the graphics, the music and the lip syncing, because Im absolutely bollocks at lip sync.
Its very nice on the movie, I liked the scenes in it, especially since the song is sad.
I`d like to say dont rush too fast man, because this idea is very nice, plus, you could have used the whole song as well.
Really liked the song choice and the lipsyncing was decent. With some practice, I'm sure you'll be able to score much better. You just need to study up a little on pacing, advanced tweening and character posing. Just give it a little more time. Good luck! :)
I like this song, and thought the actual cartoon was quite haunting and moody, you did a good job of this. It was simple, but effective and I saw the artist in this work, it looked as though you put your heart and soul into the animation and really had fun doing it.
I gave an 8, not for the animation or quality, but for doing something with which you displayed passion and heart.
This movie was like.....eating a really good burger, with really bad fries.
Some of it was good, like the syncing was decent, and the animation was horrible.
But.....it couldve been better
But, your gettign better and With alot a practice and experimentation you could make a really good animation out of this.
You got a really good score! Better than anything I have! I think. -goes to check scores-. Anyways, this was really good. All I think needs to be said is to work on lip-syncing a bit more, and try using thinner lines. Other than that, awesome job!
I'll give you a 6 cause your obviously new at flash, and i know its hard so I'll cut you some slack.
The sound sync was supprisingly good for a movie ...... like this (no offense)
The animation, like I said, for a noob, it was alright.
Song, Was good.
Here this is how to get a 3 on newgrounds, atleast.
Take some time with your flash movies, don't do a rushed job, take atleast 2 weeks.
Stick to music videos. I've seen your voice acting, Keep off it till your voice is low enough to sound decent.
Alright keep to animation, you'll be good eventualy.
lag en bedre version din moddafuckin piss of shit!!!!
