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what happensb when the circus comes to town?
only thing i did not like was the abrupt ending. But great flash!
very fun animation, fun to watch aswell, although you should make a menu as said before
Splendid Animation, but a play button and a menu with some sample clips from the movie and maybe a basic introduction. I wasn't exactly sure what was going on. The Hero moved a little fast for the backround and it got very repetitive watching her go about the city. Overall Good but needs some work. I Give it a 9 and a 4.
Excellent Animation! A few critiques though:
- A play button at the front would be nicer than just starting
- The ending is abrupt and we're left with a black screen; it could end better
- The background moves past faster than the figure appears to be running. You cold fix this by incorporating a midground AND a background. The midground moving faster than your background, of course.
Good job. Your animation skills are elite.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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