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Reasoner- Where Do We Turn

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'Reasoner- Where Do We Turn'

by: Reasoner

Date Submitted

07/13/2008 | 08:28AM EST

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2.02 / 5.00

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Made this after reading lots of flash tutorials.Primarly I learned how to make fade ins/fade outs.

This flash presents a trip of a stick figure who enters the NightSky City(The name does not appear in the flash).He enters the first room,goes down to a hallway...and watch the flash for the ending.:-)

I do think this is much better than the first one I submitted to Newgrounds,and I do look forward for reviews.Keep in mind that I'm a begginer in Flash :-)

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Average Score: 3.8 / 10

Score: 2
rockyoutothecore

".... D-:"

date: July 31, 2008

ok dude, u just ruined a good songs rep with that crap

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Score: 6
krazykatie2004

"For a 2nd effort, it was pretty good!"

date: July 13, 2008

I can't sit here and judge and tell you what you did sucked, because you ARE new. It didn't have much of a plot, but I believe that once you learn more about the software you use that your flashes will be much better. Just keep working hard and doing what you are! One day it'll be easy to make a 10 minutes mini sode of something and you'll be on the daily 5 list! Good luck and keep up the hard work!!!

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Score: 3
favorites123

"um,.. yea"

date: July 13, 2008

I think its a generous rating... but any ways! looked fun! kinda.. scary story and a short ''adventure'' and i think you've noticed that he is not moving his legs much.

AND ONE THING YOU HAVE THAT I DON'T IS HOW TO GET THAT FADING EFFECT! I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW.. but you have demonstrated the basic animating skills.... and well, its a start.. ill be keeping and eye on you and hoping to see what new things you have learned in between this- and -you next flash.. i hope you do make one ! and try to spend like over a month on it! perfection takes time.. what i like to do is, make a basic flash (yours for example) then i will go back to the start and make the character have a face.. or layers. then back again and make the scene. then back again to make voices (or music) ... you get the idea..

I am looking forward to your next flash '' hopefully improved skills''

July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment! :-)

The fading effect is really simple to achieve.

http://www.entheosweb.com/Flash/fade_
in.asp

That's the site I learned from ;-) Have fun

I do think you wanted me to make a tutorial-flash (a flash anim where I explain how I do different things).Am I right?

if you have a Yahoo!Messenger account,add me (bogdan_5844) and we'll talk better ;-)

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Score: 2
triforceguy1

"What to improve"

date: July 13, 2008

It's not that great but what you could of done is animated the stick person's legs to make it look like he's walking and also add a replay button.

July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

The legs are hard for me to do,because I haven't got used to flash yet. I know I should add a replay button,I will look over the net for some tutorials on doing that.

Thanks for the comment ;-)

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Score: 6
OddManLC

"I'll give it a 6"

date: July 13, 2008

once you make something that isn't so boring I'll give it a better rating, music was ok and the animation wasn't bad, but it was kinda a blah since we don't even know what happened, but it was descent, keep up the good work and someday you'll get front page

July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

Yes,the storyline is a bit boring,and the ending is a bit weird.
I was thinking of making a sequel to this,where I would continue the adventure and make it more interesting.

Thanks for appreciation ;-)

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