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its only my first ever animation lol so give me a break if theres mistakes here and there :) im still learnin :D
nicely drawn and all that,music fit with it kinda lol
and like everyone else said... not enough time to read the text, even for fast readers >__<
hehe i kno :) thanks for watching it .. i will fix this prob wif my next animation :)
That was really good! I really like your art style. In your next one though, could you let the text show a tad longer on the screen? Good job =D
ty very much :) yeh i will do that :) just getting used to using it hehe :) took ages to complete! actually did this for some uni work:)
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lol, yes this one earns a 5 rating. if this is truely your first flash animation then awesome. you did your homework and im thoroughly impressed. just to reduce the odd extra screen part adjust the size of the viewable area in your flash program. keep it up i want to see the rest of this story.
yeh it truely is my first, i studyed using flash for ages before i created anything lol! took longer figuring out how to use it than creating the animation! , yeh i will do that , thanks for your advice! :)
Wow, that was actually quite good. The drawings were fantastic, and it was pretty smooth for being a first. :)
I'll list a few of the negatives here to help you improve:
-The top and bottom had a black strip, which made it look bad since the window was not fit to the right size.
-The fading in/out was a little overused
-The text wasn't displayed for long enough. I'm a pretty fast reader, and I barely had time to read it a few of the times.
-Storyline/script could use a bit of work, it was a little bit confusing through the text, though understandable through just the images.
Other than those points, you did a fantastic job on this! :D
hey :) thanks for your advice! i will take it onboard! i agree with you on the text! and the fadeins! hopefully in my next animation i will use less text and try and animate the characters more :)
this is not your first flash animation...
yeh it is .. everything is original including character designs, and it took along time to create and learn the ins and outs of flash
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