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the beginings of my rpg. Im going to do a lot more work before i submit the finished version, this includes
plot
weapons
better graphics and animation
better music
anything else i think of when making it

Update:
You can now see the enemyies health and level when attacking.
Theres also an animation when you sleep.
Boss Fight at lvl 10
Fixed up shop so you can now see what it looks like
The weapons system is working though the staffs dont have any images yet .(If you go into the stats menu(button at bottom) then you can try all the weapons for free! Once youve *Bought* them simply click the image to eqp them)

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Average Score: 5.3 / 10

Score: 5

"okay..."

by: milkman2002

date: July 13, 2008

It needs some work, but it's pretty good.

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Score: 10

"Good!"

by: DBrackett

date: July 12, 2008

I thought this was good, when you update everything that you say you are in the comments i will be sure to check this out again.

It seems that this is a shell to 'get the code' out the way. Everything worked fine, but the text at the potion shop got kind of blinky.

Looks good, If i could suggest some sort of char creation, like Bandit or Mage..Or Bard, knight etc

This has great potential to be better, keep at it! :)

July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

Thxs for the positive review! I like the idea of car creation but im not so sure how to do it. If i can figure it out ill use it but otherwise people should be able to customise with different abilities

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Score: 10

"hmmm"

by: HorrorAliveLT

date: July 12, 2008

not bad keep working i like it

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Score: 3

"Meh..."

by: MeatLoafFan

date: July 12, 2008

As you said, "beginnings".
Here is my grand list of stuff to do:

-Make the main menu interesting, background, options (quality, music, etc), and some instructions (even if it's just "move mouse"). The New/Load game is dull.
- Fix the graphics for the stat counter (the arrows are pretty crummy),
-At the stat counter, add examples of what you can do with each stat, and add a background.
- In-game stat counter, should be able to lower stats.
- The graphics of the actual locations are more cute than anything else, fix the path (straight lines), background graphic is too bland, add some more places to go, the picture of town is pretty bad.
- The graphics inside the house is horrible. Make it better. Make some indication of sleep (screen flashing?)
- Woods, graphics fine, add more enemies (maybe another map?)
- Town, eww... Add a background, use straight lines for the buildings, make the town hall work (use "Ocarina of Time" for an example of how a town should look).
- Make the arena work.

The music is annoying after awhile, but as soon as it gets annoying it stops. I don't know whats more annoying, the fact that it's bad music, or that you didn't loop it. Loop it, add a mute button, change the track (or add other tracks).

If you really wanna score high points, add a figure that can move around with the WASD keys (but that may be for another time).

All in all, its the beginnings for something, follow my list like a check-list, enjoy yourself with flash,

July 12, 2008

Author's Response:

Wow! Thxs for the review! I fixed the music problem now so it *should* be looping, im considering weather or not to make the player moveable and im starting to upgrade the graphics. Im glad youve taken the time for this review and i realy am thankfull!!