Score: 8
"Another Triumph"
date: October 4, 2008
This piece encapsulates the miracle - and also insignificance of - life very well. Another excellent use of symbology, coupled with good style, intuitive music selection, and impressive flash skills make this quite enjoyable. From the flash standpoint, I saw only one flaw, and it may have been intentional, anyway. It seemed that the orbit of the blue planets three satellites stuttered for a bit when it first began to zoom out. It seemed to clear up after that, though.
I really have nothing to add for you to improve your style, unfortunately. Although I can say I enjoyed your presentation of the rain clouds, the formation of the rainbow, and the disappeaarance of the rainbow with the rising of the sun.
Great job.
October 4, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! Yeah I think the planets thing is a problem with the file... they shouldn't do that... I actually dont have the original file anymore... It went corrupt... so yeah... Bummer there... i was really upset about that for a while... i really didnt have time to get the finishing touches on it... But maybe it just works... I dont know... Lol I should try to fix it... maybe open the file on another computer will do the trick... thanks for your long recview!!! Lol and for the 8!!!