The Unfinished Animation


Date Submitted

07/11/2008 | 01:21AM EST

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2.57 / 5.00

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This cartoon is quite old and remains unfinished. my computer, for some reason, wont let me finish the animation, debugging this flash took around 2 hours.

The animation is about to mechanical villains fighting over a gem that will grant them some sort of powers (i never really looked into it's plot, it's basically just a mindless fight)

the two characters are Nightmare- the larger black and red one with a permanent grin planted upon his face (introduced second)

and Shadow- the silver, black and Red robot with the skull head and scythe (first character introduced)

the animation will end abruptly due to the cartoon never reaching completion. even though it's not done, i thought i would submit what i had because i will probably never finish this animation and just move on to newer projects with better characters and better plots.

the animation gets progressively better as the cartoon goes on. so please try to make it to the fight scene, the intro is somewhat garish as it tries to explain the plot

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Average Score: 6.4 / 10

Score: 8
NeWuSeR345

"Hey, that wasn't so bad."

date: July 11, 2008

That wasn't so bad. Despite the fact it wasn't finished. :( It would've been awesome if it had been finished. But that was still great!

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Score: 10
Mavorick

"Wow, I can't believe how picky some people are."

date: July 11, 2008

Okay, obviously a great amount of time and work went into making this animation. It was extremely detailed and is a fine piece of work, entertaining, and a great job. I voted 5. -Mavorick

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Score: 8
Wan59

"Very cool!"

by: Wan59
date: July 11, 2008

At the bezginnig of the animation, I found that the quality was pretty bad, but later(whan the 2 robots are fighting on the moon), I found it was adapted to the characters, I don't know why.
Please finish the animation! :p

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Score: 2
5SS-PsychoWiLL

"Inconsistant size"

date: July 11, 2008

I agree with the previous reviewer, their size seems inconsistent. I'm guessing this was a first flash, as the animation, and methods weren't great...
Good for a first attempt though.

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Score: 5
TheSmashMan

"= ok"

date: July 11, 2008

characters and objects look amazingly detailed but animated a bit stiff
some animations were spot on, others were weird
the city was on a metal square in blackness and that was the biggest car ever lol
it was ok

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