LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
THAT WAS SO FUCKING STUPID BUT AT THE SAME TIME SO FUCKING FUNNY LMFAO
Author Comments
Cartoon doritos idea is TM by Szafranko corporation.. but doritos themselves are owned by dorito's company..
This being my first real animation i have sent i doubt this would be any good as i have reviewed many animations and all the first ones are never that good so i ask you to read this before and after you watch the animation in hope to give helpful criticism along with that i would like the peoples opinion on what the characters should look like since i would like to stay with the Doritos idea
This isn't my final copy of this movie i actually wanted it to be longer, with better audio and a kitchen setting as a background but i didn't want to put alot of effort into somthing that i havn't finished deciding on what characters are to look like..
So... below is a list i'd like you to decide in your reviews on the change of character design if that isn't too much to ask
Eyes
1. keep eyes like in movie.. ( black dots )
2. Classic cartoon eyes ( black dot surrounded by white and then a black outline around the eye )
3. other ( give your own opinion )
Body
1. Thin outline around body boarder
2. average outline around body boarder
3. thick outline around body boarder
hands
1. keep with 3 fingers
2. five fingers
arms/legs
1. no joints just cartoony wavy arms
2. bone joints
nose
1. Nose?.
2. or no nose
Mouth
1. teeth
2. teeth and tung ( I'm not quite sure how to spell that..)
3.lips?
4. combination / other ( come up with own idea )
and if theres anythign else you guys woudl like to change or improve on.. just say so and i'll consider it i wont go by majority on these votes i'll go by which set i like the best.. :) thanks for the help and hope you enjoy this
szafranko responds:
w00t
characters are fine
leave them like that. but you should work more on your story line
szafranko responds:
thats funny im geting complete opposite from others.. say increase time and effort in characters and the story line is funny just poorly drawn
Well....
At least you put on a New Grounds Pre-Loader for your video.... so that earned your rating +2!!!!
szafranko responds:
thanks?.. could u put any effort into a review?.. or is that it..lol
I didnt like it at all
Bad animation and I didnt think it was funny at all
szafranko responds:
this dosn't quite help?.. if you read author comments like your supposed to.. then reviews are ment to help me improve on final copy.. because if you again.. read author comments you'd know this isn't even close to final copy..
It was okay
It could have been better, though. Funny concept.
szafranko responds:
if you read authors comments this isn't the last you will see... i just wanted to show people whats going to come and get some help on character design but hay thanks for the 7 :)