Score: 6

"it was....ok....."

by: ladiesman101

date: August 27, 2008

it was ok, but you can do better. way too short, and honestly, i thought the explosion was part of the ride because there was a decal of a bomb on the front car! but, seeing that "Taliban" is a middle eastern name, i think you are stereo-typing just a little bit.(like just because some iraqies are suicide bombers, you are kind of implying that they all are. thats what a stereo type is, just fyi.) ill still give you an A for your effort, but hope to see better from you in the future. but it still put a small smile on my face.

Score: 7

"lol :D"

by: Edalas

date: July 11, 2008

That flash made me remember something.... :D lol

I see that you've made progress, you're drawing is getting better but you could work a little more on it. Also, I see that you have a great sense of humor. Continue like that and you'll get far :D

In the futur, you might want to do it a little bit more long and have like a different storyline for each episode but with the same Taliban.

also, to make it less predictable, you could show broken rails and just before the cart get an accident, you could make the Taliban explode. That's not predictable and pretty funny.

Score: 0

"Short, predictable and sloppy"

by: Stickiller

date: July 10, 2008

The punchline is predictable and unfunny. It's just an obvious joke that turns your animation into a quick glimpse of a cart passing by on a sloppily drawn rollercoaster.

Score: 8

"this is funny..."

by: SlayerX3

date: July 10, 2008

...in a very ironic way, but can be seen as ofensive but it's no crime to have some sence of humor about the way other people decide to ruim each others lives

Score: 4

"uh......"

by: RealFaction

date: July 10, 2008

Well graphics were ok but work on stuff like this harder and make it longer next time even for a short it's too short. Besides what you were trying to accomplish wasn't exactly executed in the best way.