Score: 4

"hmmm...."

by: kakuzu

date: July 10, 2008

ok man
i respect your flash and your favorite for naruto i like too and
the animations is not easy to do
i respect this
i know you can do better
takes a while but i trust in you
but i like the poor deidara :P

Score: 2

"suggestion"

by: altimecca

date: July 9, 2008

if your flash skills have become better, may i suggest that you take these flashes back to the drawing board and redo them, making them into something good. rather than putting out something that wouldn't get good reviews. also, the volume on the music was too loud. that is really something that should be leveled when making the flash rather than forcing the viewer to turn their speakers down. hope to see your future submissions.

Score: 2

"Needs refinement, but potential is there."

by: watsdis

date: July 9, 2008

Horrible, if not an embarrassment to your seemingly fan interest in Naruto.
You've somehow turned you somewhat a tribute flash to Naruto into degrading it further for fans and non fans alike.
Unimpressive at best and could use improvement. I can see the concept is there, which is great, but its delivery is horrible.
A good critic states the obvious, and is not afraid to be honest. I hope you see the big picture and turn your direction else with more effort.

Score: 3

"Not bad"

by: RTthepuppy

date: July 9, 2008

My score contradicts the title, no? But hold on a sec, I'll explain. I liked the concept, but the execution could use a LOT of work. I do realize you made these a long time ago, and I'm sure you have a busy schedule, but if you have spare time to remake this with your current (most likely improved) skills, these could go somewhere.

Most of the subtraction of stars is because you submitted something that it seems you aren't too proud/confident of. If you can't put something in expecting a good score, I can guarantee the NG community will agree with you, then take it to the next level. Only submit something you think is ready otherwise you're wasting people's time and well... let's face it, people on here are cranky =P

I'm not much of a Naruto fan, and I admit some of the jokes weren't too funny, but it's got a kind of random/slipshod humor that I found rather charming. The humor could use some refinement, but not so much as to make it tight-lipped, know what I mean?

I'll be completely honest, this was horrible. But I see a very faint glimmer of hope in it as well. Try again, if possible =)

Score: 10

"awsome!"

by: cylenri

date: July 9, 2008

AWSOME :D

poor deidara T-T