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Uploaded
Jul 8, 2008 | 2:16 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Ok this is my official 2nd submission to newgrounds (And attempt at flash for that matter). I said i'd do better since my last submission nearly 2 years ago but i havent been able to focus on Flash(ing, if thats what its called lol) due to school but this flash has been laying in storage for quite some time and i thought i might finish it up.

You may notice a few changes in the art style (Thats cuz i got better at drawing with my new wacom tablet(I think)) and its not officiallyglamourous as the rest but i think i did better since my last submission. Btw Tried to color but it got all messy and out of hand and i lost some frames in the process so dont be surprised if the first few frames loose color. A majority of this flash was frame by fram(Like 95% of it :])

Song: JetPack by FloBots

Reviews


bert705bert705

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

hmmmm

i'm in two worlds about this. on one hand it sort of looks like you just freehanded other stills from anime. for example, the main character evading the scythe looks suspicously like edward elric. if that's the case, then i wouldn't usually rate it and say that you suck, etc.

but there was elements that you clearly didn't rip off, which interested me. however i think you're puttin too much detail into the faces when there doesn't really need to be that much if it's just an action sequence. furthermore, i think you overdid it with the black flashes and the backgrounds just weren't there for a lot of frames.

i suggest doing a few movement tests, like walk loops, runs, jumps, kicks, etc. from different angles to get your style down in order to make a long, decent quality animation that people can respect and call original.

i'm still new to proper fullbody flash and i have to practise a lot as well, so i know what sort of challenge you're up against.



KhaineIIKhaineII

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Like the rough sketch of something on TV.

You have a real talent, Kojitia. Your drawing skills, while rough, are still quite amazing, and I'd like to see more from you in the future.

If you got a more refined animation up, with smoother drawings and a simple story to go along with it, I could see you turning out a very nice final product.

The only thing that gets me...just like anything related to "anime," do their weapons really need to be 1.5x their body mass?


kojitia responds:

Lol. No they dont but its a great eye catcher :]


M-ShackM-Shack

Rated 3 / 5 stars

not bad

I say work on ur lines, they r too shaky. If u cant control ur tablet, put a piece of paper over it to make it easier to draw with.


kojitia responds:

OK gotcha


MidladMidlad

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Nice one

Good Drawings! Really good! I saw a very nice shot on the axe guy jumping on the enemy...wow!
So unfortunate sone animations were poor....but,hey,youre good!


kojitia responds:

Lol..? thanks?


TheProphesistTheProphesist

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nice style

I like the way this was made, though if im correct, doesn't this start with colour.
Yet the colour is gone after about half a minute?
I bet it would be cooler if you made it all in fullcolour :P

great movie though


kojitia responds:

Ill Put color in next time just for you~!!