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Scott and Jeff (Buy!)


Submitted: 07/06/2008 | 08:27PM EST

File Info: Movie | 2.5 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Genre: Other

Current Score: 4.01 / 5.00

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Something around seven months worth of work culminating in my longest, most complex short to date. I think it's pretty awesome, but what do I know, right? Seriously though, enjoy! Comments are appreciated.

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Average Score: 8.4 / 10

Score: 8
LozzoSAURUS

"nice"

date: 5 hours ago

i liked it, but some parts where bitter bill was shifting his positon and talking seemed a bit slower than might have been better. also i think that after the guy was really shocked when the animation started moving, he wasnt as shocked as he could have been. but otherwise, it worked well. i like the FbF and how it was smooth.

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Score: 9
Havayosunu

"Wow That Looks Good!!"

date: January 16, 2009

Animation: A very nice blend of fbf and tweenings.
Plot: Well not very original or great, but nice anyway.
Music: Really nice and goes well with movie, and extra kudos for your making it with your bro, too.

January 21, 2009

Author's Response:

Animation: I do my best! Thank you very much.
Plot: I'm not going to try and argue that the plot was original, but it served its purpose...
Music: Nothing like a little brotherly bonding over a jam session!

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Score: 10
LtMcMuffin

"Loved it"

date: July 7, 2008

There were a few parts that dragged for a bit, but that doesn't mean it was bad... you avoided the cliche of the drawn out battle of the Animation vs. Artist, and you kept things fresh for the most part.
The voicing went well, I was curious how you'd do on it since I haven't seen you do voices. This actually could have worked as a silent film but the voices didn't hurt.
The music actually accompanied it well, I don't really think it puts anybody to sleep like kennsj claims.
Anyway, this is a great improvement for your work, and it seems you are going nowhere but up in your efforts, so great job.

July 7, 2008

Author's Response:

Hey, glad you liked it. Keep your eye out for the next one, hopefully I'll be able to work on the pacing a bit.

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Score: 8
kennsj

"Some classy moments, but..."

by: kennsj
date: July 7, 2008

Like the dude below me said, you have some issues with pacing.

The gestures and frame-by-frame stuff are brilliant in this animation. Nice sense of flavour.

The pace of the thing though, along with the very sleepy background music, kind of make it drag along in parts.

I say take the brilliant bits and expand them into a full animation in that style.

July 7, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah, I realized the pacing issues. Live and learn, right?

Brilliant? Hey, I'll take it!

I'll consider expanding it, but I think I'm gonna tool with some new stuff first. Thanks for the advice though!

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Score: 8
vlaktemaat

"pretty nice!"

date: July 7, 2008

hey dude, i can see youve put a lot of work in this thing! keep working on these things, you have a talent for animation. the only thing is, youve been told already by other reviewers, the animation is a little slow sometimes. it gets boring to watch. make it a little more lively...i have the same problem with my batman hates his themesong movie and batman hates robin movie. they are also a bit slow, so im working on that:) you should too. i give this movie a 4/5 and 8/10....

Greetz!

July 7, 2008

Author's Response:

I think it's because I didn't storyboard or anything like that, so I just kinda went overboard occasionally. I'll have to keep that in mind for the next one. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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