Score: 8
"Some classy moments, but..."
date: July 7, 2008
Like the dude below me said, you have some issues with pacing.
The gestures and frame-by-frame stuff are brilliant in this animation. Nice sense of flavour.
The pace of the thing though, along with the very sleepy background music, kind of make it drag along in parts.
I say take the brilliant bits and expand them into a full animation in that style.
July 7, 2008
Author's Response:
Yeah, I realized the pacing issues. Live and learn, right?
Brilliant? Hey, I'll take it!
I'll consider expanding it, but I think I'm gonna tool with some new stuff first. Thanks for the advice though!