Eh..
Needs sounds, or something. And some better effects for the screen, like crazytree said.
Author Comments
Took: 1 Hour
Made By: Jake
For: Creative Works
Website: www.creativeworks.co.nr
Notes: I dont normaly do flash work so this is just a pilot.
I've adjusted it to suit people's comments
so quiet
The quiet movie days are over; if there is anything that's more helpful then at least adding sound effects then let me know. Also, something cool you can add is maybe computer looking shivers and scrambles to the screen, aside from that you got the computer part great. Hmm maybe I'm taking this too seriously; I mean it is just a pilot.
P.S. flashes should at least take more then an hour
creativeworks responds:
Ive added sound XD
mmmm
Put some music or some sounds
Needs more work
i hope this is not the quality you are hoping to submit the final flash at.
Try a faster frame rate as well as more sound and better animation. Best of luck.
ehhh
sorry no sound and all it was was a comp starting up than a stick figure with a knife to the head not much there actually theres nothing there no story no action nothin just a message that everyone dont like havckers oh well keep tryin