Score: 8
"Alright lets get started"
date: July 5, 2008
OK yes you have vastly improved your artwork.. i'm proud of ya.
Animation: still a little weird at times but gets the point across just fine, the only thing i would like to see from you in the future fromthis department is to speed up the action a bit, some sceens felt like they took forever.
Sound: not bad, sometimes the music kinda drowned out what people was saying a little bit but they was still understandable.. ony other thing is that all the people sounded a little too much like each other.. i could tell that you did the voice for fisher and lambert and you dont want that.
Storyline: I really like the basic idea.. your mission.. is to get a cupcake! lol but i think you shoulda made that more of a joke and held that back a bit. Also i wanted to break that stupid radio.. especially at the end! You really like that song?? Cuz if you do i'd like to know where i can choke you! lol J/K
Overall: i think you are making great strides from your previous work, still need a little polishing but that just takes a bit of practice.
July 5, 2008
Author's Response:
lol actually my brother did Lambert,
yeah I don't remember how I chose Mambo No. 5 for the song in it.
Thanks for the review, the only new ideas for flashes I have now is the Wild Ride 3
I'll really have to work on that animation ;)