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My first submision, and publication
This is my first finished project lol, open it like a pop-up
u got potential
i like ur work, but i think u got a lot more potential to do more than this. try to do a sequel where there are more options, and a cumshot. everythings gotta have a bukake in it for hentai.
4 a first timer if u want a 10 i would give her a diffirent look and put an expion and a objective like a climax u no it was other then that it was all right
for a first time
pretty good. The animation is smooth, and the look is decent. You've added a few things in there, but should take it further. The girl needs more expressions, sounds would be nice, and a climax bar or something of the sort would be great, as well as a climax depending on what you were doin to her at the time to go along with it.
Are you fucking kidding me? u have mi submision like a fav. . . thx it means a lot ^^
for this being your first flash, this is pretty good. The animations flow relativley smoothly and the graphics aren't bad at all. i would reccomend that you use sound, different hairstyles, and more interactivity on the girl herself.
Giving us some different women, as well as facial expressions would up the rating for this alot. Nice first try, I'm looking forward to what you make next.
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