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Sniping in a secluded area should be pretty easy... provided you've been given the right info.
This is my first flash to Newgrounds. Hope you enjoy.
Please rate reasonably, and I'll take any advice from you "experts" out there. (Just kidding, I'll take any)
for a 1st
better than mine, which is my only, cause macromedia 8 is hard and i get agrivated each time i use it.
but fake and real DO work, and is clever as long as it is used right, other words....
The Graphics Were A MajorDownfall...
Then Again, It's Your First Flash So..
The Plot Was Very Good. I Like Snipers :D
The Words And Actions Were A Little Off.
The Pictures Were Just Wierd.
Real/Fake Doesn't Work :D
6/10 3/5 :D
Thanks for the critisism. I need it.
ok, could use some work
not to bad, but not great. right in the middle. joe's voice was kinda quiet, i couldn't hear him most of the time, maybe add subtitles or something? it was a 6/10 job overall for me.
Yeah i saw that, it was because of the Ambiance, it dulled the voices.
I'm gonna be a rebal
you can never make it in newgrounds leave forever.
I'm kidding with some practice and trying hard you'll be on of the best
Thanks :) ill try my best.
The only thing i can say
Make the animation better maybe redo it cause it was really funny nice work other then that.
It seems thats what everyone is saying 0_o.
But thanks for the review.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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