Score: 5
"Well..."
date: July 12, 2008
It's a very first person orientated story, I'll give you that. I'm not a fan of the telling of the story like you're a 15 year old girl, who always used phases such as 'and I was like' and 'and then she said' - they just seem to grate against my personality.
I thought it was going great guns until the girl started throwing up and then the whole kicking her in the vagina part was obviously a little too silly for the tale in my opinion.
The animating is a little off the wall, but it's workable, with effort to reign in the eccentric movements, we could get something very nice looking presented to the users and you'd get much more acclaim for it. The main thing you need to work on is a major plot to take the characters somewhere other than just this little story. Once we've got that, you'll be able to produce a fine animation.
[Review Request Club]
July 13, 2008
Author's Response:
I love nothing more than multiple dicks on my face.
