Score: 9

"Pretty Good!"

by: Cyberdevil

date: May 17, 2009

This one is actually better than a few of your later ones, seems like you really spent good time on your first real attempt. The voice acting fits in nicely and the animations are all welltimed. All that's missing is background music, otherwise everything needed is init, and it's not too short either, keep it up!

-cd-

Score: 8

"Wow I'm impressed."

by: azn-sk8er-dude

date: July 27, 2008

This was your first flash I actually enjoyed. I love voice acting in animations so that's a definite plus. The fight was actually I was surprised! You did a very good job. The only beef I have on your movie is that there are no subtitles for your voices, and you didn't credit the voice actors, and I didn't really like the song neither some of the SFX. If I can hear correctly did Rina-Chan play Ibuki?
Well nice job man.

Score: 7

"Your sprite animation has perfected..."

by: TheGodfather

date: July 12, 2008

But you lack in story and directions you can go with the chosen sprites..
With spites.... the only thing you can really do is parodies... If you wanted an action series you might just need to write your own script and draw them... It annoyed me throughout the movie how the sprites would jump around in the background as in real life we don't do that... so there really is no point for that unless they're fighting... again most people on newgrounds don't like stories with the sprites they have seen before.... the only exception would be Randy's Mushroom Kingdom movies...

On the bright side... you've gotten through the hardest part of a flash and that's animation and perfecting it... you have great potential for something new... you just need to be a little creative and find it...

Score: 5

"Too combat orientated"

by: Coop83

date: July 11, 2008

It's not that the combat wasn't well illustrated or coreographed, but the whole thing concentrated too much on the aspects of the fighting, rather than the actual storyline which you gave us.

The voices were too quiet compared to the sound effects and the fight music that you used. I was forever reaching for the volume control, to turn up the speach and then turn it down a load for the fighting.

To be honest, at the start, you've got too much going on in the background, without much happening at all - make those characters do something, rather than just pose, they only clutter up the storyboard.

I'd also consider either using better prepared and compressed music files or not using such large swathes of individual tracks - 9.4Mb is quite a filesize, considering how short the piece was.

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Score: 7

"It was alright"

by: nickisnew

date: July 11, 2008

To tell you the truth I didn't like it, just because I didn't like the storyline. You did a good job with all the sprites and voices. Also you did a flawless job with the fight scenes. I think it would make a better game then a movie, but that's just my thinking. I think you deserve a good score for all the hard work.

I'll give you 7/10 and 3/5

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