Score: 9

"there great!!!"

by: GIN-TAMA

date: July 6, 2008

it was good there father reminds me of kenshins teacher from samurai X but i digress the animation was good and was pretty smooth it felt kinda short like an opening chapter to a manga but you really put heart and soul into this great work

Score: 10

"Xin like show?"

by: melvin2898

date: July 1, 2008

this picture seems a little like the series Xin good job!!!!!!!!

Score: 10

"Be strong."

by: SpikeVallentine

date: July 1, 2008

I saw your thoughts from the P-BOT daily award blog.

Be strong.
Practice practice practice.

I liked this, for some reason I liked your cartoon.
You got potential and you're real damn young. 16. I'm crazy old!

"its just a wast of time and it's very deppresing watching dudes that can kick your ass in 1 day of work without even drawing a circule"
Listen. Who cares.
Don't care.

Care when the caring matters.
And right now, seems like if you care, it'll affect you.

So just ignore them, they are just digital, computer awards anyways.

Get revenge, kick harder ass in your next project. Try even harder.
Do your projects with passion, not to win awards.

The invisible shadow of passion is success. If you quit because of the way things are here, I don't think that's fully passion driven works.

Ultimately, it's a sprite. Ignore it and move on. Let them swim in their "digital awards". Let them keep copying and pasting sprites. Ultimately, let everyone do whatever they want, we all have our own lives.

Be more positive. You know what, it's kinda cool when you get no award, or not a daily first place. Cause it's like...imagine...when you do get an award or a daily first place.

Look, this submission got no award right? So I wonder what your project will look like when you do get award. It just feels cool. I got some projects that didn't get first place (which would be nice). And it feels/looks cool.

Think more positive, maybe you'll be more happy.
Happiness helps motivation and energy.

You'll be needing those for your next animation.

As long as you're doing better than you were yesterday, that's all that matters.
God bless you.

Score: 9

"almost perfect"

by: LoveDDR

date: June 30, 2008

but im pretty sure next time you will nail it for sure
work a little more on you subtitles

Score: 7

"Pretty good."

by: Yargle

date: June 30, 2008

Overall it was a pretty good movie that could use some touch ups in certain areas.

First of all, your writing could definetly use some improvement, right now the story is kind of generic and unoriginal.

The animation is pretty good though, but you could use some work in the art department, because as of now you've got some oddly sized limbs and poor anatomy. You had some pointless/ drawn out scenes in the movie too that made it seem as if you were just trying to stretch out the duration of the movie.

So, it was pretty good, but it needs work.

Keep practicing.