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iShirm takes a trip to the moon, although he's stuck there now, it's quite a shame. If you review, I will respond.
Pointless and amaturish
The animation quality here was very poor. Sometimes you can mask the lack of artistic talent with a style, but you failed to strike one here. Thus, the piece as a whole was unsuccessful.
The "joke" if you can call it that was pointless, flat, and lacked any real thought or effort. At least it was congruous with the rest of the piece.
The sound design was poorly worked. The sounds and music felt sparse and disjointed. No effort was made to meld them together -- even a simple fade would have sufficed. At least the music choice was good.
I would not recommend this piece to any of my friends. I think the author should not be satisfied with this level of work. There is much to improve on.
There is, if I put some more effort in.
I would change my aura to light. But you should make a movie some longer.
I will try to make one longer.
Whoa Jeez This was amazing, nice work man, make more!
lmao, iShrim comes back from the moon.
I will never say that a cartoon needs nice graphics to be funny.....but it needs something like a payoff.
So i was sitting here and watching, thought: Original, someone gets shot to the moon.
But then here was the point, where i was grining a bit.....it had nothing to do with Freddy Mercury...i swear.
All was ruined by "Smells Like Shit".......its not funny, especially not in a loop.
Ill suggest you to think about better payoffs and if you wish to, work on your graphics, but as i said, a cartoon doesnt need good graphics to be funny, but at least they have to be funny.
That was the ending, didn't know how to end it, it's not like I really thought hard about this to be honest.
the only thing he does is say "Smeels Like Shit"
Like this review I'd say, but you know.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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