Score: 6
"Expecting more"
date: June 27, 2008
Once again I think you've been underrated. But in all fairness you did get some decent suggestions last time. Also, you sort've jumped around even more than you did in part 3. The story is progressing pretty well.
A quick fix you may want to do on this one, or at least try and prevent in the next one. I know the tree spirit was supposed to be older therefore a little quieter when he talked, but you made him too quiet and it was a little hard to hear.
Take other peoples suggestions to heart in the next one, and I look forward to seeing what happens next.