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This is my very FIRST EVER flash submition.
I totaly gotlost in what to create, so I thought of something quite easy. =.="
I just hopeyou won't judge it too hard.
you kinda stereotyped this Marilyn Manson isn't goth...... he looks it but his music isn't. also the goth should look a bit more like the metal head. the colors on it were too bright.
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Well its notbad for your first on here, you seem to know your way around the flash program, as for this i would like to see more animation and more backround work, you have the characters down but it needs more, anywasy welcome to newgrounds.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Decent for a first time
Good job for a first time
Just work on your flash skills and stuff and you'll be good in no time
fuck dancing.make the metal guy mosh XD then get the punk guy to skank and thrash, and i dont know how ppl dance to slow goth music....marilyn manson is awesome enough they dont have to dance.he just enters there minds and commands them to lay still and be captivated by his skirts and corsets.cannibal corpse is good and all but ther too big.get a lesser known band like neaera.but good flash good songs too
It's...pretty good. The fact that both the goth and metal characters have some sort of satanic symbol is kind of offensive to me, but hey, it's your flash, you can do (almost) whatever you want with it.
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