Score: 2

"...."

by: geadenfoglia

date: June 26, 2008

Story? Was there one? The art was pretty bad and the fact that you added the one scene with the incredibly detailed weapons made everything else look worse.

Score: 5

"Pro's N' Con's"

by: Karlos-elite

date: June 26, 2008

Starters, Graphics were poor, no sound and no story line.

Well, I can only give you constructive critisizm:

- Add a storyline.
- Give more time and effort in graphics (Don't overly use tweens)
- Don't give up.
- Use sound effects.

Really. Just because a number of people don't like it dosent mean you should quit. Continue and IMPROVE. Don't give up :)

Good Luck and Kind regards

Karlos

5/10 - 1/5

Score: 2

"no good"

by: skunkgator

date: June 26, 2008

music was terrible and so was the animation, drawing, lack of sound, and story. I really dont get why you have to hit play twice, once to start it and again after he gets out of the hospital idk if it was a mistake you made or what but i would change it for your next onee if i was you.

Score: 0

"You spent a week on this?"

by: goron40

date: June 26, 2008

First thing I noticed: The music starts playing before you hit play. Not sure if this was intended or not, but it seems like poor coding to me.

The graphics are reminiscent of MS paint, and that's not a good thing. They are shoddily done, and honestly I couldn't even watch the whole thing.

The sound was non-existent, with the exception of "Hollywise" which just plays in the background. Bleh.

The story... what can I say about the story that hasn't already been said about the other parts of this movie? ... I'm fresh out.

Sequels are usually supposed to follow originals that did WELL. So save us all the extra blam button click, and don't make another.

Score: 5

"Keep trying,"

by: mthealien

date: June 26, 2008

because you'll get better. Work on your skills for a while, look into some sound effects like Akaline said, and completely ignore any fool telling you to stop.