Score: 9

"Very good!"

by: cazok

date: June 30, 2008

Personaly I think the score is far to low for this movie, but I can see why some people don't like it. The animation was superb, backgrounds and details too, and everything fits togheter perfectly. Now, what it needs further on is a little more story and timing. A proper introduction would be in place too.
I got a suggestion: Try remaking it with a little more story and details. You can copy most of character drawings and movements, and put them into new sorroundings. Perhaps you should animate the last part instead of just making white and black pictures? Sort of ruins the experience.
I would simply LOVE to see more of this. It's all so stylish and cool it's almost painful. (Oh and thanks for using my music by the way)

-Cazok-

Score: 8

"Great!"

by: DemonWarLord

date: June 24, 2008

But I want to know what they say when they say it. That would make it better.

Score: 8

"Looking good."

by: GloineFiodh

date: June 24, 2008

I thought I saw two similar names. Not too shabby. I liked your other one a little bit better. It seemed like you had put a little more time into it. I'm sensing a mini series with this maybe? I like to see characters reused in short little animations with different plots, like spikevalentine's speed animation series.

Score: 8

"Very nice"

by: WILIZIN

date: June 24, 2008

I though the animation was very nice and semi smooth. The only thing is I don't understand why it suddenly went black and white? Did you run out of time?
Other then that nice job.

Score: 8

"cool!"

by: wasabi777

date: June 24, 2008

well this is a mixed bag, i loved the animation and the characters were well done. Only thing would be where the action cuts to black and white, then the end. This was probably intended but to me it seemed like a flashback but it wasnt. otherwise it was great. keep it up