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by: HyruleanHyroe
06/24/2008 | 10:57AM EST
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2.14 / 5.00
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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This didn't take very long but this is my first flash. please give constructive criticism.
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Average Score: 6.2 / 10
"SWEET!"
Sweet flash, dude, and FREAKING AWESOME MUSIC! I wonder what cool kid wrote that?
ya I know it was awesome music good job on it
"good"
pretty good for a firstie
"okay...."
wasnt even a man. it was more like, an elasto line. it kept my attention thought. good job and keep up the good effort
I was going too put a head but then I thought that it would look weird.
"Well..."
You and I both know I can't possibly give this a good score. However, advice is free. It's not particularly terrible as far as firsts go, but I'm sure you know it needs a lot of work. Backgrounds work wonders as far as prettiness goes, as well as filling that empty white space that seems to be the trademark of low-quality flashes. You do have music, which is a start. SFX always help, if used appropriately. Just needs, in general, more substance and story to be viable.
Good luck!
"pretty cool"
for a first, I think you could do better in the future. Good job!