Score: 8

"i think...."

by: Subliminalvids

date: July 24, 2008

I thought this was pretty well done nick this one ACTUALLY had a background and the sticks ACTUALLY moved :)

Score: 3

"Not Bad"

by: Wolf994

date: June 24, 2008

It should of been longer.

Score: 5

"Keep working."

by: Corky52

date: June 24, 2008

Animation / Graphics - It seems to me like your trying here. At times it seems like things were either a little glitchy, or very glitchy. Sometimes it would be a little "jump" in the animation that shouldn't of been there to the dead stick men bodies on the ground moving off to the side a little. The stickmen could of been drawn out just a little bit better, they seemed to be very simple and rough.

Story - There isn't much too do with a stickmen fight, but when making one you have to think to yourself, "what will make my flash original, or different from all the other stickmen movies." In my opinion this is really hard too do with a stickmen movie, but is also needed to receive a higher score.

Audio - It's always good to have music in the background like you did, but I'm sure you could of improved your score if you would of added sound effects like when the gun was shot, or kicking sounds effects, etc..

Overall, needs work, but keep trying. You will get it some time.

C52

Score: 4

"Mediocre at best"

by: Jacava

date: June 24, 2008

This is far too short, but if the graphics were good then I'd understand. Unfortunately, that isn't the case here. Mind you, the fact that it was short means that it kept my attention the whole way through; any longer and you would have lost me. Try using a bit more colour, and add a proper story; I didn't understand what was going on at all, and the animation was a bit jumpy (that is to say, some frames lasted longer than others, giving a lag-like effect. Like slow-motion, but looks bad.)

On the upside, though, the fighting moves were pretty good and the soundtrack went with it well. If you want, you can contact a more experienced flash-maker to give you hints and tricks, and maybe you even team up with one to create a joint submission (try the forums; I don't know how it works, but it's a start). You've got potential; you just need to find it and use it as best you can.

Score: 6

"Meh"

by: SupaDupaMarioGuy21

date: June 24, 2008

I find it too short, and badly animated. But at least the music fits well :D