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Not much else. You have great talent with drawing and animation, but wheres story development. I'd like to see more from you for sure, but in the next one, take everything you did great in this one, and expand. Good luck to you, and I will be looking for your next.
it's a good start for something, that's for sure. The animation is very smooth. keep working at it and you can make a very good movie.
It looks like a good robot story is under way! It may be due to the lack of color and shading, but I thought the roboot looked flat; it had the appearence of a paper doll. Other than that, it was very good.
Animation / Graphics - This looked like some sort of test to me, which would be my reasoning on why you didn't have any color added yet or a background. The animation and drawing were very well done though. I must compliment you on that.
Story - No story yet, but like I said it seemed to be more of a test to me then anything. If this was to be turned into a real flash movie with a story put behind it, it would probably have an amazing score.
Audio - It's good that you had music in the background. Maybe you could of had some robot sound effects when they walked or something, but pretty good here.
Overall, this has a lot of potential if you would do something with it.
kinda better than most flashes
great animation, good music, a bit too short tho :/
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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