Score: 7

"Oh man that face..."

by: Originality

date: June 24, 2008

is disgusting. Pretty decent music and background, but you're putting details that are one not needed and two the choice in proportions just does not work. At step 4 you were good, at step five you beat her face in with a garbage lid and filled it with waste. Then you added the spinecrawling eyebrows, a huge neck (a man's neck), and she looks like one of those people at diners that you know have seen a rough ass time in their life. She looks like some trashy excuse for a life that gets by on very little as she watches reruns and talk shows as she sits down to eat her ice cream straight from the container.

My advice: with flash, convey realism, don't try to make it so. Flash is meant for clean lines and you're overdoing realism. It's like if you draw someone with pencil and paper and you include EVERYTHING it makes them look old and ugly. That is precisely what you've done here. You've goen too far and make me want to puke. Go from step for and include one shade of shadow or many consecutive layers CREATIVELY placed. Not how they are in real life, but how you want to CONVEY realism. The only flaw you have is you have realistic shading without realistic proportions OR colors. And of course it's too detailed, in all the wrong ways.

Score: 7

"Good tutorial"

by: CrazyShuba

date: June 23, 2008

Only problem I had with it was that the music didn't loop. It left about the last half of the tutorial empty with silence. Besides that, good job. Maybe Shorten some sentences, a few seemed to run on a while, but overall, good.

Score: 7

"Pretty Good"

by: Brycearoni

date: June 23, 2008

The drawing was well done; the final result wasn't the best though. In my opinion you could have had a better character. Great tutorial though.

Score: 10

"This is great!"

by: Exiled-Sin

date: June 23, 2008

Never thought I'd actually see a tutorial on NG, so this is a first!
I hope it makes the front page. :)
Oh, a little tip, instead of using computer art for a drawing tutorial, use your own images instead. :)

Score: 10

"Quick and efficent"

by: loopyguy0

date: June 23, 2008

ty i usally dont draw in layers, as im a natural freehander and draw the entire picture