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06/23/2008 | 06:06PM EST
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1.66 / 5.00
Score Rank: #126,477 Popularity Rank: #131,368
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Yeah, this is my first flash movie. And yes, i know this is a piece of shit. But be gentle, this is my first try on flash. xD
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Average Score: 4.2 / 10
"uhh huh..."
well the animation was good. but why do i want to watch this>? it needs a reason to exist.
"Animation was okay"
But seriously, why bother submitting that? You said that it's a piece of shit; you could have at least added sound, some gag at the end, anything. It looks like the beginning to a longer project; you should have waited and submitted that.
I wanted to see what the newgrounders think about my movies, and to see what i need to improve in the next time.
"sorry but NO"
dude i thoght it was cool but sorry i sucked please make more work on the next flash u make
"Unfinished"
Your animation is fine. The figure exits smoothly. The silence is heavy, even white noise (air rushing past the plane) would be better.
However, you may be taken to task for meaninglessness. I know this represents animation effort, but a viewer demands effort on the story as well. In this case, the figure could have landed in a wood chipper or on a wedding cake.
"Don't be so hard on yourself!"
For a first flash, this was very good. I usually expect a lot worse when authors say they don't like their own movie. Your movie was way better because you bothered to make backgrounds and color everything. The bad parts about this movie are it's length, and the lack of sound. Don't let my grade discourage you, put some more time in your movies and they will pass the portal with ease.