Score: 5
"Nice Improvement"
date: June 24, 2008
A very good improvement since I last saw your work with RANDOMNESS.
Nice animation, good sound.
As always, I do have a few things here and there to suggest.
First, the music in the beginning seemed too out of place. Next time, I would try a few ambient selections from the NG Audio portal. Also, in terms of sound, Xguala sounded like it was a little too close to the microphone. Clear up the the sound a little for episode two.
Next, the animation styles seemed to switch from intro to the next day. Try and avoid that kind of stuff. Pick a style and stay with it, even if it means a little more time in development land.
In the next one, give us a little background into that explosion, tell us who Xguala is.
Overall, great improvement. Keep it up.
June 24, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks
Btw in the first trailer it explains hes a science experiment that was mastakivley made by two flamable chemcials, witch was sapost to be a sidekick for the professer. but turned into a sweet innocent confused mutant.