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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
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06/22/08 – 07/24/08
i was making this flash for a drawing and brief animation test
The story is weak, granted its just a test. Polish the animations and work on a better plot. Cut down on the cheese factor. People don't sing about pie. The drawing was cute.
You got pretty sloppy with the animation there. Not saying I could do better though. Also, you need a better plot line. Definately.
that was boring it needed sound and alot of other stuff to :P
the people that watch my vids all know that i only make shorts, i broke that with xguala pt. 1 but ya, you kind of made a realy strait forward short, maybe try some voice actors, i know some friends that would gladly voice act for you. :]
Anyway, good luck with PT. 2 and dont listen to the other peepz, i learned 80% of the people that vote low on a new flash animators dont have 1 flash in their profile, and i learned the other 20% are beginers to, and they understand how time obsorbing this profession is.
So good luck with PT. 2 im looking forward to it. :)
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I liked this its not all pazazz but it has something so i do hope you make more i would love to watch, maybe add abit more color and possibly add some improved looking fonts.
Funny short
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