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Jun 22, 2008 | 1:41 AM EDT

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It is my first submission, the animation is well... bad XD. but the point is the story ^^
Mouse drawn

Soon--------------a remake because this lack of move
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Es mi primera sibmicion (creo ke asi se dice), la animacion es... mala XD. pero el punto es la historia ^^, ire mejorando con el tiempo ^^
Dibujado con mouse por eso está tan feo XD

Pronto-----------Lo volvere a hacer porque le falta movimiento, mucho movimiento...

Reviews


JessismithJessismith

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 10, 2008

Perfect!

I love this!
It really reminds me of the movie I'm working on now.
Great song choice, and storyline....:)


LonelyAngel responds:

well
I will chek you movie if I can =D


yoyo911yoyo911

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 2, 2008

Great

You really have talent and i really liked it.
I was wondering: how long did it took you to do this animation?


LonelyAngel responds:

mmm...
not to much
like... 3 days...


BlazingDragonBlazingDragon

Rated 3 / 5 stars June 23, 2008

Thank you for using my song! :D

(I am not an artist and have no flash experience, so my review might not be great. Here are my thoughts, though)

I liked the flash! While the art wasn't top-notch, it looked very good for hand-drawn. I have seen many first-animations that were crude stick-figures, and this is definitely better than those. You've got a good start!

I do have some gripes, however. The biggest problem with this is the walking animation. Every step is very rigid and choppy. It looks as though there were no connecting frames between each step. I don't know much about flash, but I believe there is a technique called "Motion Tweening" which would held in this regard. I'm sure there are tutorials on this site somewhere.

The sky and characters all looked good. The landscape was nice, and the color choice matched nicely with the mood of the song. I never imagined this song being in a video about love, but it worked rather well to my surprise. :)
I did notice one character which I have to criticize. There was a person who was in the shadows and was colored black. This character looked too "blocky". :(

As far as the story goes, I didn't really get it. xD I understand the underlying theme of love, but did not understand how wolves fit into this. I also didn't understand why wings came out of the person at the end. Was this supposed to be symbolism and represent freedom or something?

Anyway, this is good overall. It isn't the greatest in the animation and story department, but the drawing were good and the music fit well. With a little bit of patience and practice, you could be a fine flash artist! Continue to work hard and hone your skills. Oh, and thank you once again for using my song! :D

~BlazingDragon


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LonelyAngel responds:

:D the composer!!!
It's symbolism but... I thinking about doing the remake :L
but it will be the same music ^^
sorry if my English is bad but I think you understand the idea XD
well... thank you for your music ^^


ryan8919ryan8919

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 22, 2008

nice

si esta bueno pero pienso que le falta un poco mas de movimientom a los personajes, de resto esta bien, la musica le da un buen toque.


LonelyAngel responds:

seee xD
todos dicen eso jajaja xD


riktor1riktor1

Rated 3 / 5 stars June 22, 2008

not bad...

Actually, the art was fairly good, esp considering it was mouse drawn. I know how hard and time consuming said artwork can be (hence why I have not submitted anything, I'm to lazy to work that hard when I could be studying for my classes).


LonelyAngel responds:

just wait and you will see a better artist X3