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NOTE: I have NO problem with Delaware. My friends made me make this. Although it was kinda funny to make.
Anyway, Delaware. Out here in the Midwest, we never hear ANYTHING about Delaware (no news, no nothin'), so apparently some military-esque guy will nuke it. Dunno. No offense meant to Delaware-ites.
Why Bomb Us? :(
Don't bomb me. :'(
that was great
Wow. It's alive.
My thoughts? Delaware-X!
I COMPLETELY agree.
I can see this is your first submission (first flash, too?) and to be fair, I thought it was a bit of a disappointing flash: the graphics were alright, the animation of the explosion ran smoothly and the smoke was nicely done, too but the thing I didn't like about this is that you didn't use voice acting and it wasn't exactly long.
The concept behind the flash (which you explained in the author's comments) is quite humorous, but it didn't go so well into the flash.
Suggestions I have for you: next time you make a flash, if you can, maybe ask on the Newgrounds' flash forum for voice actors - loads of people will be happy to help and spend a bit more time on the length of the flash - no matter how long it takes - the longer, the better.
Right now, I'll have to give this a 3/10 but I'll wish you good look on whatever future projects you do.
Thank you for actually giving me constructive criticism, as opposed to "Try harder next time."
As far as voice acting goes - I didn't really want to do any myself (my high annoying young-teeny voice kind of doesn't fit that mustached guy) and I didn't really want to ask for any voice acting because I wanted to get the thing finished.
The length is basically all I felt dedicating to this thing, as I really didn't like it at all.
I originally had no plans to submit this, but said friends I mentioned in the Author Comments convinced me to.
There are plenty of things I could have done to make this better but I think this is OK considering it took me maybe 30 minutes, tops.
More effort, please
It didn't make me laugh, it made me cry. Try harder next time :P
Ordinarily, I would make a snappy comment here about how you haven't submitted anything, therefore my effort is still above yours, however, this is a piece of shit and I feel bad for making it.
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