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This happened me with the sister of a friend. Its my first frame by frame animation.
Ha, I can relate
Don't get me wrong, I don't make a hobby of letting girls reject me. But in every man's life there is that one time....
I think you portrayed a very troublesome emotion quite efficiently, and effectively.
It was alright
the story was pretty simple, but,
you got the point across without
using any words very well.
Although the movement wasn't too great,
the drawing was alright, and i did
like the black and white style you chose.
Overall: It was ok.
me gusto como animas, para haberte inscrito en newgrounds hace tan poco, y ya tener una animacion, se necesita arta dedicacion asi que eso lo valoro
no entendi bien porque el y ella no eran compatibles xP
PERO bueno, el piano al final siempre sera un final clasico xD
un 7 de 10 y un 4 de 5
Simplemente a ella no le gustaba, por eso le dio esa espantosa "equis".
This flash was really great. I liked the story and how you told it. Didn't have to use any words just visuals. Also liked the ending with the piano crushing the guy. I'm sure every dude has been turned down by a girl they liked and felt that way too. Having something that people can relate to in a flash = good. Keep up the good work man.
Necesitas un "Preloader"
La historia y el concepto no estan mal, pero necesitas un "preloader" ya que si no, la pelicula sigue por si sola y no espera a que carge toda para ser vista y eso puede hacer que se ve lenta. Ademas, se seguiria repitiendo constantemente. En todo caso intenta arreglar ese problema y luego vemos.
Buen trabajo, yo no podria ni hacer la mitad de lo que haces. Sigue asi. :)
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While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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