Love the animation.. voice on the other hand..

.. is not good at all. You can animate clay decently so I suggest you continue to improve your practice.

Not bad for you first claymation though

yeah everyone else is right

put this on utube

I agree with Legendary supersayin,

Yeah, this really should go on Youtube, or Youporn

You have talent.

This was pretty good. You can certainly animate clay, no doubt. BUT, the voices were a little annoying and the claymen looked a little out of shape. Nevertheless it was a good claymation.

gah

This would've been a vaguely decent level of animation killed by a totally unorigional storyline, charachter trait set and dialogue, but the voice acting was truly the last nail in the coffin.