Score: 0

"It reminds me of Zelda"

by: Skuk

date: July 28, 2008

Zelda was a video game my uncle Tom used to play. He would take me to his room in the attic and we would play till i got tired and fell asleep. When I woke up, i was always wearing new clothes... his clothes. Great job keep up the sub par work!

Score: 4

"not very good..."

by: vg-mp

date: June 30, 2008

sorry but this wasent good dude, i have some friends over and they said they didint like it and left my room to play halo... sorry for being mean but its the truth.... yet again no action...no good jokes and pretty much all talking... there was only 1 funny part.

in the future, cut back on the talking.,... more motion animation and action and jokes... and a better voice actor... get rina chan

Score: 7

"Excellent idea...but it could use some more"

by: shihan-PK

date: June 18, 2008

What you have going I'm sure will be great. You're really on to something here, and I did enjoy watching this for the most part.

Just a couple of things:
1) Careful with Navi's voice. Sorry, but not only did it sound disconnected, but it also slightly got on my nerves a bit, just cuz things went on and on and on (i.e. the stairs joke). Just be careful with that and speed things up a bit.
2) Add a little more. it was a good length, but when you look back at it, only two things happened: a) Link got the master sword and tripped on the stairs, and b) he ran to "Zelda's house" cowardly. It's a good lenght, and it could be longer, just be sure to add a little more substance in it in the future.

Hope I've helped you out! PM me with any questions or you need further help!

~Shihan-PK~

Score: 7

"it was alright"

by: Loan127

date: June 18, 2008

it was ok but the voice wasn't so good. it got real quiet then real loud when navi was talking. other than that it was pretty good.

Score: 10

"lol"

by: peterbeaner777

date: June 18, 2008

maby u can get some ^.^ lol my fav. part