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Jun 17, 2008 | 3:57 PM EDT
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In the year 2105, the world is in a desolate state. A madman has recently come to power in the US, and has allowed for anyone to sell their babies into the military for ten thousand dollars.

It's not completely necessary that you watch the previous two chapters, but it'd help greatly.

Warning: Anime + Plot.

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ReklessCreati0nReklessCreati0n

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 21, 2008

I agree with TheManOfH

This was way to much anime, orientation, I especially didn't like the drama parts at the end where you just shaded over their eyes, that bugged at that point the eyes would have been the key feature to his expression.

Overall, the anime style fit, but since it was America, the whole Japanese school system didn't make sense to me, although I didn't realize it til the end. Good job, and I hope to see more from this series, its very well done, but still not perfect.

Animation - 9/10
Audio - 10/10 ( GREAT VOICE ACTING )


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TheManOfHTheManOfH

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 21, 2008

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

well i like the idea and the 'drama' (ooooooooooooh) but its too anime like. its WAY to anime like. this is supposed to be the USA, why isnt the school like an american one?



SarahlinSarahlin

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 21, 2008

To slow

One chapter in a year are really to slow. You must speed-up a little bit.

Animation of this chapter: 7/10 (your animations are better now)
Voicesquality of this chapter: 5/10 (in last two chapters was they are better)

A episode need some more story, so write and animate for chapter 4 one/two minutes more.


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JAFTJAFT

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 21, 2008

I like the voicework.

But some of the tones concerning certain words and parts of phrases need to be polished.

I was interested. :3


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Van-plVan-pl

Rated 3 / 5 stars June 21, 2008

good, but...

Plot, which is the most important stuff in this kind of movies was pointless, and well.. not original.

Again school, again super-duper-powered students, some post-apocallyptic world. School life is as hell as boring. You try making your characters a living persons with feelings, but it ends like you've make them emotional cripples, who hit each other, when they are arguing.

And, where the new school recruits come from? World is in a desolate state afer all, yes? And above all, where is the whole point of keeping those students in the bases? To brainwash them?

The characters:
- L-from-Death-Note like guy, the Prodigy, who doesn't have any human feelings at all.
-Cybil, tough ass bitch, who isn't actually a bitch but a sobbering whimpy girl inside
-Prodigy's mates, taken from the random shoen anime, acting like trying to be cool, but actually being lame
-Super evil villian, mad man, controlling whole the US. Soooo original.

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Animation weren't so bad, however you need more detailed foregrounds and backgrounds. Pepole gestures are pretty good, i like noses of your characters :P

Sound quality could be better, you could use less variety of music to keep it possibly non-mixed. Voice acting is awesome, you really feel emotions coming from the voice actors.

Overally, try to make it more original. Basing your plot on existing stories isn't always that great.

Keep up the good work, I hope you will suprise me in another episode :)
4/5