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The thing that struck me most was the colour change at the end - after the dark greys and black and white used throughout, this felt surprisingly refreshing and quite uplifting. I found the rest of the flash to be meaningful and pretty figurative with having read your description afterwards, though I think you need to be more literal - the storyline was quite an abstract one, and some dialogue between characters could make the whole thing flow together a bit better. Not that the storyline was at all bad - just hard to interpret on seeing the flash alone.
I found the MSP song a bit too upbeat for the black and white part of the flash; maybe some more atmospheric and ambient music such as Aphex Twin or Brian Eno (or, you could try The Cure or Joy Division if you want a real band as opposed to electronic music) could have been more appropriate here; though I though the song fitted quite well with the colourful ending. The animation was great, in your typical wobbly style.
9/10 - needs a more coherent plot, I think, but your current direction is great in terms of style and animation.
Thanks, glad you liked it and thanks for some of the advice, too. But MSP > everything else fuck you
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Yet another fantastic flash. I liked the message that this animation gave, and the music went along very well with it. This one, especially, was really unique and was more serious than some past flashes of yours. Still, I loved it very much! <3 <3
Keep it up, man. Can't wait to watch/review more flashes from you!
Thanks, glad you liked it and understood it, too. :)
nothing special, but decently executed
my summary pretty much rolls that up.
the flash wasn't exactly ground-breaking, the animation wasn't great and the drawings were average, yet the whole thing was incredably fluid and well put together, which was your saving grace. good stuff.
plus, extra kudos for song choice ;)
Aye, glad you PARTIALLY liked it and I'm glad that it did its justice. :)
I love it too.
The music fitted really well with the flash. Somehow I managed to understand it straightaway. Which made it even better. The FBF was really good too and gives it a unique style.
Good luck winning a daily award in the future as well, i'm sure it won't take long =P
Haha, thanks, that'd be nice - glad you liked it and understood it, too. Some of the first reviews I gained for this worried me as the people who had written them didn't understand what was going on and thought it was all irrelevant or nonsense. Well, glad you liked it, thanks for the review. :)
ITS ONE IS ONE OF THE BEST MUSIC SHORT MOVIE IVE SEEN IN THE LONGES TIME I CAN REMABER FROM.
GREAT STORY ABOUT HOW THE WAY U DO THING THAT UR CHILEDEN WILL DO IT THE SOME WAY U DO THINGS.
AWSOME MOVIE MAN!!!!! AWSOMER!!!
Actually, the point of it all is that you shouldn't tolerate hate aimed towards you or your loved ones or you'll suffer in the future - but hey, still, glad you liked it.
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