Score: 8

"very good"

by: Tophatwonder

date: September 3, 2008

drawing was amazing, starting part of the movie with the bee following a line was feh, but when you added its whole body movement it looked great.
nice.

Score: 1

"...do over.."

by: l3al3yT

date: June 12, 2008

Why?

I wouldn't even know where to start..

Score: 0

"booorrriiinnnggg"

by: jcgurango

date: June 12, 2008

The portal is for COMPLETED work..

Score: 8

"Good Physics!"

by: JSHADOWM

date: June 12, 2008

Yeah, it was good and realistic the way they flied!

AND Nicely detailed!

Some points to turn this flash into a good scorer
1: Flash background, cause flash Graphics on a normal photo don't look good!

2: Aspect change
in this flash, we had a landscape camera and ONLY a landscape camera, try to change aspects like, pin the camera behind the bird or in front of the wasp at times, it gives intensity!

3: Music
pick a nice fitting tune to go with it, NOBODY wants to see a flash in SILENCE! ;)

But, hey, this was only practice, right? Keep up the effort!

Score: 7

"Its a start."

by: Inferno6674

date: June 12, 2008

Not bad, its a start. Just needs some music, I enjoyed how you mixed real world background images into it as well.