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Eulogy For: R.I.P. Father 2008
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
06/12/08 – 07/06/08
dead father? theif and boy hentai? oh lmfao wtf was i thinking
if ur serious i'm sorry 4 what happened but if not u just made fun of a very serious matter
i think it was funny about the cum part only cuase im childish( alittle) i gave it one star for that.... my grampa died becuase som theif was drunk so dont talk about that kind of shit...
You are a sick, disturbed little boy.
Also, the plethora of typos made me sadder than this crappy story.
I'll be looking for your next submission so that I can make sure it doesn't stay on the site
I... I can't breath...
can't... stop... laughing!
Wow thats hilarious. I like the joke at the end and how your so serious right through it. Until the end.
Is this some kind of joke, why would you make something like this and try to make it funny. YOUR FUCKIN MEST UP! >:(
OK now thats just SICK man u gonna submit a movie when a thief raped u.....
Man thats JUST SICK and u gonna sell it too ........ Riiiiiiiiight.....
and u gonna sell it in honor of ure dad..... well... thats not NORMAL u know :/
There are lines you don't cross, and shit about raping someone is entirely past it. Joking about your father being stabbed in the heart and being raped is disgusting.
However, I can't say this is bad because it's not my sense of humor. The only criticism I really have is that your spelling sucks. Spelling is especially important in a flash video where the only thing you have is words and just all-around makes you come off as being older than five.
That's just disgusting
Constructive Crticism (Because I really should): Don't do anything like this. EVER
Wot are you on?
this got past judgement, how?
this is not the sort of thing you joke about.
i mean, im sorry if you were serious or anything, (most likley not that you are) but this just goes way over the line.
seriously man wtf, for the beginning was like man i feel sorry for this guy then WHAT a sicko...
pointing out the obvious, but hes lying
in a way that's not funny but LOL
This isn't even a little bit funny. It' immature and to a lot of people out there watching this, may offend them.. This should be taken off newgrounds.
I do have a sense of humor.. but not to this bullshit..
I really think this was bad i mean it really had no purpose and really it was just immature and like the dude below me said it could offend people
Pure art.
"wait"
lfmao
you know what the ps part at the end made me laugh, I guess this could offend people, oh also I'd like to pre-order a copy of that tape...
Why would you sell something on ebay of a man raping you? And how is that an honour to your father? It's more like discrase. It's not even funny.
this is stupid, you are a racist ( I viewed your profile)
this is pointless
viewing it is a waste of 142.4 KB of your download just to see this idiot make attempt to be humorous
Bahahahah! You have a SICK sense of humour, and if this somehow isn't a joke (not likely), then you are just some weird, sick, discusting, discraceful idiot...seriously....its just sick
'P.S. My ass still hurts' *sigh* some people these days...
Man, l like black humour but making fun of the death of someone (that probably didn't die) and of raping is really NOT funny...l have nothing else to say...
(actually l have: check your spelling...)
[RRC]
becuz he had that movie all wrong, rape is a great hobby
That was just stupid and disgusting....
Somewhat poor taste flash you done here.
Graphics 2/10 From what i could make out this had no animation poor spelling, did not help. The black background with letters this looked rushed ,and badly done no actual flash apart from the words.
Sound 5/10 Only the music which was not bad, quite dramatic this was the only sound.
Humor4/10 Very dark jokes this was sick but some of the bit were funny like when, you said you been raped. It was sick but funny in a dark sort of way.
This flash was bad really no effort misleading about the RIP ,is it true? The spelling ruined it as it looked silly with the, words wrong. The jokes tasteless no flash apart from the words ,it was a mess really.
Overall if you did a tasteful flash and not waste people time improve the spelling, this would have been better.
review request club
i so sorry :'(
Are the mispellings intentional?
I actually chuckled once it was finished. From your comments, I thought it'd just be a hentai pic and some 'hahah!' noise.
The story you wrote, delving further and further into depraved depths of absurdity works well.
I'm not sure I greatly enjoyed it, but I'll certainly remember it.
Well, the lack of animation kind of brought this down a bit, as it was really just a slideshow with nothing but text. The music sounded good, though. It added a dramatic feel that the text kind of mocked, which was kinda funny.
As far as humor goes, this wasn't exactly what I'd call funny, but there was a bit of humor to be found in this, if you have the right sense of humor.
Overall, first and foremost, you need some drawings and some animation. That would probably be a good place to start. :P
Review Request Club~
Intresting little story you have here, I mean it's amusing in it's own special way but it does seem to lack a lot of animation or graphics even. You could have added some of those, maybe even some footage of the attack as a preview, you know. If you plan to profit from it, you should give a little teaser of it so you can attract some potential buyers.
The text does stay on long enough to read though, which is good because I'm quite a slow reader. The audio used went pretty well with this too, though maybe the export quality could have been better, not sure what you exported it at. It's okay overall and kind of amusing but lacking in graphics.
2/5
<3
= Review Request Club =
I just couldn't see much effort put into this. I know the story behind it is saddening and sickening. It was just a powerpoint presentation put into flash form. The music was very good though, adding to the mood of the flash. But your grammar was just a teensy bit off :/
However I do hope that you have a good life even without your father :)
4 for the story behind it.
P.S. maybe you should post this in the forums?
=Review Request Club=
Not much effort put into this. Just some music and a mildly funny text. Would be much better if you'd actually had some graphics in here, or even better if you'd animated the whole story.
Right now it's just plain boring.
Oh yeah, and it's "thief" not "theif". If your flash doesn't contain anything but text, at least use a spell checker.
{ Review Request Club }
Well, this flash (and I use the term in the broades possible sense) is just a horrendous piece. I could spend my effort telling you that I hope the rapist had AIDS and that you die from it, but that would be immature. Why do you want to tell us a story like this?
If you dad died, the way that he died was probably a way that you may class as heroic. Make a tribute flash to him that way, not by giving us a slideshow of text files that could have been made better using MS Powerpoint. Frankly, if your father really had died, I'd say it was an insult to him.
Why not make some sort of cartoon that shows a guy getting up, grabbing a baseball bat and trying to fend off a thief (Please note the correct spelling, and also the correct spelling of 'molested') The F7 key helps out if you're not sure of how to spell correctly.
[Review Request Club]
That was ridiculously bad, one of the worst flashes ive seen on newgrounds. There wasnt anything to it, just text on a screen telling a story, it wasnt funny and was probably made in about 20 minutes.
There was only white text on a black backround, telling a story, which wasnt funny, it was just crap. Try to put some actual substance in your flashes.
[RRC]
Trying to be funny but executed poorly
Well it was just text,so there was no real effort into it at all, needs a hell of alot of visual things done to it.
The sound was cool, but was only a song so a bit disappointing. #
Overall it was a bad idea, the laugh value was deeply lighter than the sheer brutalness of it, but it can be improved
=Review Request Club=