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Jun 12, 2008 | 9:39 AM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place June 13, 2008

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Author Comments

Note: Daily Second!? And frontpage!!!!!?
i love you newgrounds :D

this took me some time to make!
audio and poem made by Lemon Demon,
animation and character design by me.
i hope you enjoy.
Please review :)



Rated 5 / 5 stars

The ending was funny as hell...

Pirates ARE assholes...

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Rated 4 / 5 stars


must suck for him.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Listen to the end REALLY carefully

Sly little message at the end :D

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


it wasnt bad....but i thought it was like a music video not a poetic thing

3 points for the poetry....
4 for the animation


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I have to admit, you earned your front page!

I sometimes find that things get popular and put on the front page of Newgrounds which I don't think deserve it. So when your were talking about the front page in the BBS, I had to see what you had done for yourself. And I have to say I'm impressed, smooth animation, simple yet good artwork, funny beyond the song you were using overall excellent job. However, I'd like to be helpful, and helpful means giving criticism, so if I had to suggest an area for improvement I'd say your artwork is a bit too simple. I know this is the style you were going for in the movie, but I still think your characters and background could benefit from more detail. Anyways, excellent job on this and good luck on your future projects.
-Ox Sox

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Jochio responds:

i apreciate the compliments. and im also pleased with critisism..(unlike alot of other animators :P)
the artwork is simple. i admit. im acualy trying to make it look better.. but in most cases.. i dont like the detailed version.. untill i get a perfect detailed version im gonna stick with this style:)
thanks for the review!