Score: 7
"SO EMOTIVE! ;W;"
date: June 11, 2008
I PROMISE NOT TO EAT BREAD EVER AGAIN, THE POOR GUYS!
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*nibbles a toast*
xD But yeah, let's-a make a short review, won't we?
Graphics: 7
Well drown in my opinion, really. Perhaps the lines were a little rough and not no fluid, if you know what I mean (i.e.: The boy eyes (¬¬) when the bread is toasting is too pointy to be a circle-like figure xD;). Perhaps you should pay a little more attention to this next time? ^^
Sound: 5.5
Well, mang, sorry to say it, but it's true. It's not that I didn't like the music. It's just that... It lacked sound xD; I know you wanted it to be a musical-movie type flash, but still... I didn't think it fit. D:
Fun: 8
The argument (if there ever was one xD) is fine and quite funny, really. Perhaps you should have made it a tad longer so we could know the toast better and cry for its death? xP
Entertainment: 8.5
Nothing much to say here. Fun stuff to watch.
OVERALL: 7
Well, I really got myself entertained with the video, great job. Perhaps next time you should try to animate it a little better, or make the animation more fluid (are you using 30 fps? I don't know, but I'd personally recommend that to you). Some sound next time would be also awesome. Way to go, dude! A 7!
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Oh don't worry darling. I still voted 5. xDDDDDDDDD
June 11, 2008
Author's Response:
Well, I will try to improve waht you said but thanks anyway :D