Score: 7

"Alright."

by: 4oor

date: June 9, 2008

Heres why im giving you such a low grafde for such a great story.... It's not much of a flash, at all. It's a great story don't get me wrong and the NG moto is "everything by everyone" so i suppose it should be a bit higher it's just I'm a bit of a critic so i apologize and if you want a 10/10 from me your gunna have to put it in a movie.

Nice i wanna see this movie come onto newgrounds soon.

Score: 10

"Honestly a genius story!"

by: kikanoni

date: June 9, 2008

And that I would not dare speak often.
Clearly, your imaginative abilities are fluent, and that is what amazed me.

I have read this with constant amaze, having my little theatre going on in my mind, and in it I saw a beautiful, dramatic, play. Full of costumes, and whatnot.

This project is one of the greatest to ever have been witnessed on Newgrounds. Those patient enough to read through all of this will no doubt have good word of it.

Very, very, good job.
And most of all, thank you.

Score: 10

"Brilliant!"

by: Baalphegor

date: June 9, 2008

Oh how I loved it! :D
But.... I need to know what happened afterwards... my mind cringes for a aftermath... Please make a sequal :(

Score: 10

"incredible"

by: WAM88

date: June 9, 2008

the story presented here seems like an epic novel or movie... please publish this!

Score: 10

"simply amazing"

by: UnjustCause

date: June 9, 2008

please continue your work so i may be once again find myself in awe.