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06/06/2008 | 02:00PM EST
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Will their be MORE? after the credits?
Kirby the Real Adventure. Prepare for a pretty random crazy true story of what really happend in dreamland.
~Sprittles~
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Average Score: 3.8 / 10
"meh"
animation was jumpy and... crap. i got through like half of it then i couldnt be bothered to watch the rest. u gotta make it more interesting i.e. better plot.
also u got bad spelling >.< (unless it was intentional)
"It sucked"
that was the worst kirby thing i ever saw. learn to draw man! everything sucked. was that a subliminal message saying SPRITTLES on the stars at the beginning?!
"Next time you need a plot."
I thought that you had something going on in the beginning, but it looks like you lost focus. You really need a plot. I was expecting some kind of behind the scenes story where you find out Kirby is a deadbeat dad and hooked on hot pockets. Some of your animations were pretty decent others, well, weren't. You've got talent, use it.
"kirby never sucked so much"
terrible, animations sucked, plot sucked, and it made no sense at all. But at least it was an attempt at doing something almost mildly becoming a tiny bit funny, i dont know if you got lazy at the end or your just that corny and made everything blow up great job that is the stupidest thing i have ever seen
"Good try!"
Well, what is there to like? It was a good practice. The Art style is uncommon; the dude who called it bad should shut up. For something titled "The Real Story" should really have a plot. Your work is more like a blooper reel or Pride Parade; which isn't bad, not what I wanted to see though. Oh and, you don't have copyright. You borrowed Nintendo characters, added a hoover vacuum, and then made everything blow up. Repeatedly. There's not a lot you can own in this. I can sympathize with the work it would have taken to make this though, and I hope you continue to develop your art style and vocalizing talents. 6 out of 10 for effort, and thanks for not using borrowed sprites!