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A rather sad tale of a boy being bullied while his mother was ill.
I admit to being confused by this. It just seemed too short. There wasn't much that went on. I do like the animation. It was just weird how short it was. I wish you could have more of a story set up.
It's still by no means bad. It definitely had potential. Was the boy saying some other language? I mean, the language seemed off and there were subtitles. I thought that woman was his father at first.
Finally real Jamaican Flash animator on NewGrounds.
Excellent work mi don,
Sad story but great potential. Only problem I had was with the static in the sound quality.
Thank you! I will try to get a better microphone for future projects.
Allright. I'd consider getting a better microphone, I think you could convey things smoother with higher quality sound, and I have to say I enjoy hearing the Jamaican accent it reminds me of my family, I don't hear or see many other Jamaicans here on newgrounds or anywhere for that matter so keep it up. Just keep practicing with your drawing and you'll get better you're off to a good start.
Thank you! I will trying to get a better microphone.
Nice job. It needsa bit more animation I think, and your audio was a little muffled, but it was a nice message overall, and somthing that we all could learn from. awesome work.
Thank you I will be working on your suggestions.
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