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A friend of mine had a cool picture on his msn, and i made it a flash movie from it.
It's my first real annimation, and it's lol XD
*credits, for the music, see AUDIO CREDITS*
=Hosted on Newgrounds.com & Deviantart.com=
made me laugh
needs to be longer though. make it bout 2 minutes longer. but hilarious though. good job for ur first flash.
lol you died
but how do you make it scroll? The picture? I've been with flash for a while and I still have not figured out! Thanks!
Lol, you died!
I like it. It has just about everything I look for in a
flash game-a decent Storyline, pretty smooth animation,
good animation, good selection of audio, and, of course,
a funny ending.
That flash is pretty prominent , especially the simplicity
of everything. The graphics are as detailed only to enough
that you can tell the storyline.
There are, a couple things I think you need to work on though,
sorry to say, the walking sequence with Bob, seemed a little
inflexible. his back didn't look like it was a part of him, only the
arms and legs were moving giving it an unnatural look.
You can find a couple of tutorials on walking examples
here on newgrounds. They help you out, and if you don't get
it right, then you can get the downloadable version on one of them.
On another note, the scene where Bob was reaching slowly for the
cookie and promptly cuts to the scene where he's hanging with
the "lol, you died" song. Brilliant comedy, just brilliant.
The only problem with the last scene is the lack of color accents
in the final frame. No offense, but it kind of looks like you rushed it a
little bit to get on newgrounds faster.
Also, I can't stress this enough, you need to find a new character
concept. When newgrounders see a plain stick figure, they instantly-
almost instinctively vote lower because they have seen stick figures
over and over again.
Try to invent a totally new character and you'll find
you will get a higher score.
Well, I have to say, it was a good flash and I'm glad I viewed it :)
Overall, I think you deserve higher score than you received.
I'll try to make a character next time, but the picture was about a stickmen, so i wanted that the same.
thx, for your good review.
omfg that was so fucking funny
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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