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Well, It's been a few years since my last submission but, I'm back at it. Here's a quick one I did just as a warm up for bigger projects. Hope you like it.
The animations was great. You should make more
Cure lil Flash
I like this it had alot of good points some things could be worked on and such, but you gave it all the elements that I come to enjoy in flash like this, so great start here on something pretty interesting, lol ok so I would say thats a pretty short, short, not really a bad thing but maybe adding other short, shorts would be a big plus on this, but it was an amusing flash. After messing with this abit I found it to be a really decent and fun flash, allthough it did lack some stuff, it could still be better, So I have mentioned some ideas and even basic stuff that other flash like this one have so below in the improvments section may help good luck either way. and may all your flash-works comeout with as much effort as possible.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is the type of flash that you can fully go with imagination and whatnot, So here are some options and a few tricks along with some extras that could go along ways. A better "TITLE" page not the logo but the white backround seemed too bland. A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short I would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece
Ok at best
I admit, the animation is pretty good, but this needed more of a story. I have no clue how this movie got so high rated.
Hey look, a cartoon.
I have to make one of those.
This was a completely useless review.
i liked it, i thought it was very cute by my standards, i think you should make more dude
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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