omg crazy eyes lol

man those eyes there creeping me out lol

Missing things, but good.

What was good:
-Some of the story
-Bit of a nightmare-ish to humor tone
-Characters were alright

Missing:
Buttons for automatically moving ahead after someone talks? That or voice acting maybe. See if you can find some.

Overall: As Pico would say...'Not bad. In fact, I liked it.'

i liked it

that was cool

Very Good

Some scenes could have been done better. Very good all the same.