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06/03/2008 | 05:29PM EST
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by ChrisDH: — Choose below… — DeathTech Ep1 - Becoming Deathtech Ep2 Keep Strong My Friends
Hey Everyone,
This my first flash the using sprites i hope eveyone enjoys it, its very short but i hope you still enjoy it this is part 1 and part2 will be comig very soon =D i am doing street fighter aswell so keep watching =D
Hope you enjoy it
ChrisDH
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Average Score: 3.1 / 10
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a bit good.
thank you =D
"pretty nice for your first one"
I'm giving you a 5 cause u put in good effort, and I really see some potential here. There's nothing really more that I can say that would help you other than stick to it. Don't rush things and take your time, most of the stuff I've seen on here really took a few hours, and it turns out pretty much crappy.
Great work so far and best of luck to ya
thank you very much i know i need to work on effot n stuff but i will get there lol, i kno want i need to do like i need to work more on stuff take my time jst take my time like you sed, i pratice everyday so hopfully i will het there =D
thank you very much for the advice and good luck to you
"ok it wasn't bad"
i would work on things you have potential definatly i can't say too many bad things about since i've never made a video however i can tell you what i think would have made it better..lighting and sound effects for the powering up....maybe a little dialouge other than that it wasn't half bad i mean it was a little choppy and a little short
thanks for the four =D
i will learn more about effect n stuff and hopfully i will get better thank you
"fist flash hu!?"
well ,the animation is ok(little jerky),but the effects were the point you gave me to put a 0 to it. they were as bad as an ass. try some blur and lightings.
thanks for the advice =D i do need to work on my effect n stuff but i am getting ther i just need to keep on praticeing =D
thank you very much
"You have potential"
Work on making those animations more fluid and spend a little more time getting rid of any unwanted noise around the sprites. I havent Animated in flash in a long time but i animate in 3D studio max and i know that 30 frames is a second. Try to keep that in mind as you animate so that your animations are not waaay too fast or waaay too slow. THe music was a good choice, however like the previous poster said was a little too short and looped awkwardly. With that said, I say keep working on this stuff, Pretty good for a first attempt. Definitely keep working on your technique and just the little details. Keep those animations smooth and you can make a nice movie there
i bean using 25 framper sec so many i should but it up to 30 i fink i would help alot and your rught i shoulf but more keyframes in to put make it more smoother thank you very very much for the advice
thank so much